Thursday, 18 October 2012

Twelfth Night

Jay's new neighbour had just moved in, it was Halloween tonight and he thought it would be a great chance to egg his new neighbour’s house. He excitedly rung up his best friend, Robyn and smiled to himself. When she picked up,
He mysteriously said “Guess what?".
"What?" she asked intrigued.
"My new neighbour just moved in, so bring the eggs" he laughed.
"Of course" She sighed, she knew it wouldn't work, this sort of thing happened every year, they would either be caught, or they would drop the eggs, all sorts of things went wrong, but she got the eggs and slowly made her way to Jay's house. When she finally arrived, it was almost 7:00 pm, so they picked up the eggs and quietly trampled along the garden, after a couple of seconds they assumed it was safe and ran out and threw the eggs at the house, but Jay's egg was miss-targeted and ended up smashing through the window, instead of the wall. They began to run, but Robyn was much faster and Jay was left behind, when a small old, wrinkled hand curled round his shoulder and dragged him back. This small old woman, with wrinkles on about every inch of her body started to mumble some odd words Jay had never heard of, when she was done she slowly hissed into his ear,
“Don’t you dare do that to my house, you don’t realise how important this is... You have twelve days until you die” and let her grip go, pushed him onto the ground, slowly walking back to her house. Jay seemed confused, but when he left her house and went back up the lane, Robyn, laughed in his face, saying it was hysterical. Jay told her what the old woman had said to him, although she simply replied that it was some ‘superstitious mumbo jumbo’. He secretly thought ‘what would she know though?’, so he kept it to himself.
The next day he got up and thought, only 11 more days... Robyn came round and excitedly asked,
“Want to go to the fair?
“Of course” he laughed
Robyn and Jay set off to the fair, but when they got there, bad things started happening, like, a sign fell off one of the rides and nearly hit Jay, he got hit by a flying candy floss, he got locked in the toilets and fell out of the spinning teacups. Today just wasn't his day; however he thought back to the curse, and remembered, again he told Robyn, this time she believed him. Over the course of the next 11 days he done everything he wanted to do, like on the 1st day, he went skydiving out of a jet, 2nd day, he went swimming with dolphins and sharks, 3rd day, he went on a cruise ship and travelled to all of the places and came back, 4th day, he went to the biggest chocolate house in the world and slept in it, 5th day, he went swimming in a milkshake lake, 6th day, he flown into space, 7th day, he went to Hogwarts, 8th day, he went on the Orient express, 9th day, he went to the best restaurant and ate anything he wanted, 10th day, he went paragliding off the highest mountain and on the 11th day, he went to Vegas and went on the massive roller coaster’s in it, although he didn't realise that this was his very last day... He travelled to Los Vegas with Robyn and his cute Yorkshire terrier, called Benny; he’s a golden syrup colour with dark brown eyes. They arrived and looked around, stunned by the colour and lights, they both simultaneously ran to the fair; there were spinning teacups, ghost train, food stalls, fun house, helter-skelter, dodgems and a roller coaster. Running to the roller coaster, getting the first in line and taking the first seat on the roller coaster, Jay suddenly remembered that this was his last day, and screamed to be let off, however they were just shushed and the ride rolled into motion. Halfway through the track and it crashed, Jay died but Robyn survived. After the terrible accident it was on the news for days around her area and that’s why she decided to move, though whenever she walks down his street to remind her of Jay, she always see’s that old woman, demented in the head that murdered Jay, the one that smiled at her through the  window as she passed. Twelve nights ago Jay died.

12 comments:

  1. Amazing story Sophie, I love how you used 12 Nights as your title its relevant and the story is so cool! Well done xx

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  2. Wow that is amazing Sophie, slightly scary but amazing! Xxx

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  3. That's great Sophie it's a bit scary x

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  4. Great but i didn't think it was that scary

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  5. I love this story its great and fun and i love that you made all of the things he wanted to do really extreme. Awesome story and i love how you call the little old lady demented xxxxxx

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  6. good story sophie, scary and had abit of a final destination twist, i like it, id hate to be jay though.

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  7. its really scary..... that's why I love it xxxxxxx

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    1. scary but Amazing! Good ideas put into a good story ! Love it :) Well Done :)

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  9. great scary, great descprition.

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  10. that great, love the detail xxxx

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