Jay's new neighbour had just moved in, it was Halloween
tonight and he thought it would be a great chance to egg his new neighbour’s
house. He excitedly rung up his best friend, Robyn and smiled to
himself. When she picked up,
He mysteriously
said “Guess what?".
"What?"
she asked intrigued.
"My new
neighbour just moved in, so bring the eggs" he laughed.
"Of
course" She sighed, she knew it wouldn't work, this sort of thing happened
every year, they would either be caught, or they would drop the eggs, all sorts
of things went wrong, but she got the eggs and slowly made her way to Jay's
house. When she finally arrived, it was almost 7:00 pm, so they picked up the
eggs and quietly trampled along the garden, after a couple of seconds they
assumed it was safe and ran out and threw the eggs at the house, but Jay's egg
was miss-targeted and ended up smashing through the window, instead of the
wall. They began to run, but Robyn was much faster and Jay was left behind,
when a small old, wrinkled hand curled round his shoulder and dragged him back.
This small old woman, with wrinkles on about every inch of her body started to
mumble some odd words Jay had never heard of, when she was done she slowly
hissed into his ear,
“Don’t you dare do that to my house, you don’t realise how
important this is... You have twelve days until you die” and let her grip go,
pushed him onto the ground, slowly walking back to her house. Jay seemed
confused, but when he left her house and went back up the lane, Robyn, laughed
in his face, saying it was hysterical. Jay told her what the old woman had said
to him, although she simply replied that it was some ‘superstitious mumbo jumbo’.
He secretly thought ‘what would she know though?’, so he kept it to himself.
The next day he got up and thought, only 11 more days... Robyn
came round and excitedly asked,
“Want to go to the fair?
“Of course” he laughed
Robyn and Jay set off to the fair, but when they got there, bad
things started happening, like, a sign fell off one of the rides and nearly hit
Jay, he got hit by a flying candy floss, he got locked in the toilets and fell
out of the spinning teacups. Today just wasn't his day; however he thought back
to the curse, and remembered, again he told Robyn, this time she believed him.
Over the course of the next 11 days he done everything he wanted to do, like on
the 1st day, he went skydiving out of a jet, 2nd day, he
went swimming with dolphins and sharks, 3rd day, he went on a cruise
ship and travelled to all of the places and came back, 4th day, he
went to the biggest chocolate house in the world and slept in it, 5th
day, he went swimming in a milkshake lake, 6th day, he flown into
space, 7th day, he went to Hogwarts, 8th day, he went on
the Orient express, 9th day, he went to the best restaurant and ate
anything he wanted, 10th day, he went paragliding off the highest
mountain and on the 11th day, he went to Vegas and went on the
massive roller coaster’s in it, although he didn't realise that this was his
very last day... He travelled to Los Vegas with Robyn and his cute Yorkshire terrier,
called Benny; he’s a golden syrup colour with dark brown eyes. They arrived and
looked around, stunned by the colour and lights, they both simultaneously ran
to the fair; there were spinning teacups, ghost train, food stalls, fun house, helter-skelter,
dodgems and a roller coaster. Running to the roller coaster, getting the first in
line and taking the first seat on the roller coaster, Jay suddenly remembered that this was his last day, and screamed to be let off, however they
were just shushed and the ride rolled into motion. Halfway through the track
and it crashed, Jay died but Robyn survived. After the terrible accident it was
on the news for days around her area and that’s why she decided to move, though
whenever she walks down his street to remind her of Jay, she always see’s that
old woman, demented in the head that murdered Jay, the one that smiled at her
through the window as she passed. Twelve
nights ago Jay died.
Amazing story Sophie, I love how you used 12 Nights as your title its relevant and the story is so cool! Well done xx
ReplyDeleteWow that is amazing Sophie, slightly scary but amazing! Xxx
ReplyDeleteThat's great Sophie it's a bit scary x
ReplyDeleteGreat but i didn't think it was that scary
ReplyDeleteI love this story its great and fun and i love that you made all of the things he wanted to do really extreme. Awesome story and i love how you call the little old lady demented xxxxxx
ReplyDeletegood story sophie, scary and had abit of a final destination twist, i like it, id hate to be jay though.
ReplyDeleteits really scary..... that's why I love it xxxxxxx
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ReplyDeletescary but Amazing! Good ideas put into a good story ! Love it :) Well Done :)
Deletegood punctuation
ReplyDeletegreat scary, great descprition.
ReplyDeletethat great, love the detail xxxx
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